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Today——my day

2011级(2)班[毕业] 李佩珊 2012-01-22 15:11 阅读(253) 评论(1) 英语作文
作文概要:我的一天——2012年2月22日,星期天。农历年二十九!!(2011年的最后一天哦!)  新年快乐!

  Today,I am very happy.In the morning,I get up at 9:00.Then I brush my teeth and wash my face.After that,I eat breakfast with my family at home.At 10:30,we go to the terrace and we buy some fiowers home.Oh,the fiowers are so beautiful.I love them very much.In the afternoon,we stay at home.It's boring.I am play computer games and my sister is watches TV.In the evening,we go to my grandparents'home.We have a big meal.we are so happy and we say:"Happy New Year!"Wow,What a happy time!

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教师:莫然 评论于 2012/1/24 18:08:01 
最后一句的time不可数的,所以应该用What happy time!
还有就是...flowers拼错了呢...

其他都非常好啦~~继续加油哦~~