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My Spring Festival

2009级(11)班[毕业] 梁锦林 2012-01-31 20:52 阅读(342) 评论(2) 英语作文
作文概要:我的春节

     To tell you the truth, I don't like the Spring Festival at all. When I was young I liked it very much,because I could had something tasty to eat during the Spring Festival,and I could enjoy very wonderful TV programmes,too,I also could had much free time during which I could did something I liked to do. I don't like it now, there are many reasons.
     Firstly, I can't have a good time during the Festival. Every New Year's Eve something unpleasant often happens. Once I quarreled with my second brother.
     Secondly, I can't relax myself during the Festival. I have to do many things, watch so many TV programmes, meet so many people,all these things make me very tired.

     Thirdly, spending one Spring Festival means that I become one year older, I don't like to be old. I want to live longer and be young all the time.

     Readers, what is your opinions about the Spring Festival? Please tell us, we can share our opinions. Thanks for reading! Goodbye.

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教师:邓长青 评论于 2012/2/6 19:19:34 
这是一篇高水平的作文!条理清楚,句子通顺、流畅,用词精当、得体,信息内容充实,有理有据。但个别地方用了中国式英语,如relax myself。其实relax后无需接oneself(反身代词),这是比较典型的错误!