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My family

2014级(5)班[毕业] 李晓莹 2015-02-06 22:49 阅读(238) 评论(1) 英语作文
I am Daily. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. My brother and I are students. At weekends, we often go to the park. My parents love us very much. We love them too. This is I have a happy family. There are four people in it. They are my father, my mother , my brother in family.
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同学:江艳丽 评论于 2015/2/7 4:48:08 
*^_^*如果结尾再加上“and   me”会更好吧!还有在“family”前面加一个“the”也会更好的!总的来说写的也不错的!