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My Favorite Outdoor Activity

2009级(3)班[毕业] 邓敏莹 2012-02-04 15:26 阅读(447) 评论(1) 英语作文

I’m a girl from Guangdong, China. My favorite outdoor activity is swimming. I think swimming is helpful for each other. If you can swim, when someone drop into the river or pool you can save him. And I think swim is a living skill in our live. I like swimming because it can help me keep fit and improve my will. I enjoy swimming because it not only helps me make lot of friends but also change my life. It lets me become a healthy girl.

Do you like swimming? If you like it lets join with us.

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教师:陈睿宁 评论于 2012/2/5 10:36:52 
 because it does not only help me......become a healthy girl.(wonderful sentence)
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