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happy new year

2011级(10)班[毕业] 叶莹莹 2012-02-04 16:52 阅读(364) 评论(2) 英语作文
New year is coming.We all very happy . Is`t very nice.We are cleaning our rooms and send presents to our parent.On the first day of the Spring Festival, most of people get up early and say “happy new year."How happy I am.

 

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同学:李启慧 评论于 2012/2/5 16:07:21 
作文题目开头要大写,改成"Happy New  Year"。
同学:陈雪妍 评论于 2012/2/4 18:18:46 
嗯,本文有错漏:句子开头请大写;“we all very happy"......请检查后修改.