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My Father

2010级(5)班[毕业] 吕柱安 2012-02-05 01:18 阅读(268) 评论(1) 英语作文
My father is a good father.He looks after me very well.I love him very much.My father is a businessman.He is very busy all the year round.He works very hard.His hobby is to listen to music.He often travels to Jilin and Hebei.He travels a lot every month.Now he is in Changchun.I wish him to bring much delicious food to me.This is my father
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教师:黄小凤 评论于 2012/2/7 21:32:22 
这篇文章写得太好!如果自己能写出这样的水平的文章,说明你这个寒假有飞跃性的进步。