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My favorite sport

2011级(1)班[毕业] 龚丽 2011-11-28 15:49 阅读(623) 评论(2) 英语作文

                      My favorite sport
There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as swimming, running, and dancing. However, the sport that I like most is basketball. When I was in junior high, I started to play basketball in school. At that time, I found I had loved deeply this sport. Now, I would like to watch basketball games as much as I can. The basketball games have given me the most wonderful time in my life.

 

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教师:莫然 评论于 2011/12/1 10:56:31 
哇!!!过去完成时态喔~~~高级句型哦~~~
不过呢, “At that time, I found I had loved deeply this sport.”有点奇怪哦,因为前面刚说你开始学,接着说那时候你发现了,那为什么接着又说你在那时候之前就已经爱上了篮球呢? 这里的过去完成时态用得有点...
哈哈~~除此之外,其他都很完美哦~~~加油啦~~~
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2011/12/1 9:59:02 
"When I was in junior high"? but you are still in junior one now.