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2010级(12)班[毕业] 朱曼婷 2012-02-06 11:23 阅读(357) 评论(1) 英语作文
There are three people in my family.My father,my mother and I.I have a happy family.My father is a bank clerk.He is medium hight but a little bit fat.He likes sinnging very much.My mother is a bank clerk too.She has a short hair.And she has big eyes.She looks very young.She likes watching TV.I love my family very much.
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教师:黄小凤 评论于 2012/2/9 15:11:19 
写得不错,几乎没有错误除了这句she has a short hair.头发是不可数名词,前面不能用a.