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My Father

2011级(11)班[毕业] 王俊杰 2012-02-06 18:46 阅读(308) 评论(3) 英语作文

  My Father is very tird.He usually get up at7:00 He eat's Breakfast at7:30.He goes to work at 8:00.He has a Taxi Dirver He very busy.  He go home at5:00p.m He has very busy.
  sunday Fatherandme go to U.S. dishini 's park  We have buy air economy We have happy

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同学:王俊杰 评论于 2012/2/8 16:32:49 
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2012/2/7 16:11:09 
本文语法与拼写错误比较多,修改后也可成为一篇好文章。
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